glass_icarus: (merlin-- colin morgan)
just another fork-tongued dragon lady ([personal profile] glass_icarus) wrote2009-03-17 08:10 pm
Entry tags:

fic: praeludium

....... okay, so I CAVED and cut my original story to itty bitty pieces, to be (mostly) rewritten. More to come later!

Title: praeludium
Fandom: Merlin
Rating: G
Characters/Pairing: Merlin/Arthur (pre-slash)
Summary: Guitar-boy!Merlin AU, first meetings.


Arthur waits impatiently for the subway, the sticky remnants of sweat prickling damp and not-quite-cool on his skin. The smell here in the summer is unbearable, but not as much as the heat wave outside.

He turns at the sound of a guitar, low and sweet and harmonious, unlike the pretentious and/or talentless bastards that generally assail his ears. Without thinking, he pushes through the crowd, following the music until he reaches its source: a thin, dark-haired boy, his skin moon-pale and un-freckled, long graceful fingers curling easily over the strings. The boy looks up at his approach, smiling faintly; surprised, Arthur feels the corner of his mouth slant up. Blue eyes, he thinks, apropos of nothing. Sky-blue, sea-blue; deep and shining and full of secrets.

He waits silently for the boy to finish, the song classical and vaguely familiar. "Albeniz?" he says.

The boy's eyebrows arch, startled. "Yeah," he replies. His voice sounds much like his guitar, Arthur thinks: low, sweet, harmonious. "It was originally written for-"

"- the piano," Arthur finishes.

The boy smiles, slow and delighted, a dimple flashing in his left cheek. "Yes."

He holds out his hand without knowing why. "I'm Arthur."

"Merlin." Merlin's fingers are cool and callused, his grip firm. Arthur shivers.

The metallic rumble-screech of the train arriving sends a cool blast of air over them, ruffling Merlin's dark curls and lifting the damp hair at the nape of Arthur's neck. "I have to go," Arthur says, somewhat regretfully.

Merlin's free hand taps gently against his guitar, one-two-three-four, one-two-three-four. "I'll see you around, then," he says.

"I guess so," Arthur replies doubtfully, unwilling to disagree. He gets on the train, watches through the smudged window as Columbus Circle- and Merlin, but he is not thinking about that- disappears from his sight. The feeling of dexterous fingers sliding through his own lingers in Arthur's memory for the rest of the day.
ext_55447: (Default)

[identity profile] tacitus-3.livejournal.com 2009-03-18 01:25 am (UTC)(link)
Yay! ♥ Guitar-boy!Merlin is just made of all kinds of epic win. Cannot wait for more. :D

[identity profile] glass-icarus.livejournal.com 2009-03-18 02:18 pm (UTC)(link)
thank you! :) &hearts

[identity profile] oddsbobs.livejournal.com 2009-03-18 07:05 am (UTC)(link)
That was scrumptious! And totally made the meet-again-in-the-park section even better.

[identity profile] glass-icarus.livejournal.com 2009-03-18 02:19 pm (UTC)(link)
thanks! :) haha, i am thinking of rewriting the other bits so i can use that scene... until then, it's just for you guys. *g*

[identity profile] kelene.livejournal.com 2009-03-18 08:50 am (UTC)(link)
Two of my favourite things! Guitar+Merlin = ♥♥♥

[identity profile] glass-icarus.livejournal.com 2009-03-18 02:20 pm (UTC)(link)
hee, thanks! :)
ext_64921: Deatail from JWWaterhouse's Ophelia [blue dress] (1905). (Default)

[identity profile] search-soleil.livejournal.com 2009-03-18 09:54 am (UTC)(link)
Oooh, classical music on the guitar, that is a low blow. By which I mean you've hooked me and I can't wait for more. :)

[identity profile] glass-icarus.livejournal.com 2009-03-18 02:22 pm (UTC)(link)
thanks! :D also, i can totes upload the song songs album i'm referencing, if you want it! (er, provided i've ripped it, i can't remember right now.)
gules: (Default)

[personal profile] gules 2009-03-18 10:03 pm (UTC)(link)
i know i'd totally love to hear, if you've got it on hand!

also this is disproportionately awesome for such a short piece. arthur knowing about things, despite his i-don't-care facade, invariably makes me gleeface, and the fact that the thing here is music is especially ♥.

*tracks tag, waits impatiently for more* :D

[identity profile] glass-icarus.livejournal.com 2009-03-18 10:38 pm (UTC)(link)
thank you! :) and i will probably update this post if i find the files, heh.
ext_64921: Deatail from JWWaterhouse's Ophelia [blue dress] (1905). (Default)

[identity profile] search-soleil.livejournal.com 2009-03-19 05:55 am (UTC)(link)
I WANT IT. If you've got it, that would be awesome!

[identity profile] glass-icarus.livejournal.com 2009-03-19 02:27 pm (UTC)(link)
hee, i'll update this post with the files if i have them! :D

[identity profile] yanyann.livejournal.com 2009-03-18 04:17 pm (UTC)(link)
.... I'm hooked. And as such am waiting for more, more, MORE! Yes. ^_^

[identity profile] glass-icarus.livejournal.com 2009-03-18 09:17 pm (UTC)(link)
glad you liked it! :)

[identity profile] bayb43.livejournal.com 2009-03-18 04:27 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, love it:)

[identity profile] glass-icarus.livejournal.com 2009-03-18 09:17 pm (UTC)(link)
:) thanks!

[identity profile] goddes-divine.livejournal.com 2009-03-18 04:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Wonderful... it makes my heart dreaming!

[identity profile] glass-icarus.livejournal.com 2009-03-18 09:17 pm (UTC)(link)
thanks!

[identity profile] talipuu.livejournal.com 2009-03-18 04:57 pm (UTC)(link)
This was an amazing beginning, you have a gorgeous writing style. I can't wait to read more ♥

[identity profile] glass-icarus.livejournal.com 2009-03-18 09:18 pm (UTC)(link)
thanks, i'm glad you liked it! :)

[identity profile] berusama.livejournal.com 2009-03-18 05:59 pm (UTC)(link)
oh god, how adorable!! can't wait for more :D

[identity profile] glass-icarus.livejournal.com 2009-03-18 09:18 pm (UTC)(link)
thank you! :)

[identity profile] rane-ab.livejournal.com 2009-03-18 07:20 pm (UTC)(link)
Lovely! :D

[identity profile] glass-icarus.livejournal.com 2009-03-18 09:18 pm (UTC)(link)
glad you liked it! :)

[identity profile] justmyteacup.livejournal.com 2009-03-18 07:46 pm (UTC)(link)
i like!!!!! great connection between them!!!

[identity profile] glass-icarus.livejournal.com 2009-03-18 09:18 pm (UTC)(link)
thanks! :)

[identity profile] sffan.livejournal.com 2009-03-18 11:02 pm (UTC)(link)
Very promising start. Looking forward to the next bit :D

[identity profile] glass-icarus.livejournal.com 2009-03-19 02:28 pm (UTC)(link)
thanks! :)

[identity profile] kispexi2.livejournal.com 2009-03-19 08:52 am (UTC)(link)
Very much liked this bit: Blue eyes, he thinks, apropos of nothing. Sky-blue, sea-blue; deep and shining and full of secrets. It sounds a spell, an incantation.

[identity profile] glass-icarus.livejournal.com 2009-03-19 02:29 pm (UTC)(link)
&hearts i'm glad you liked this! :)

[identity profile] alexi-lupin.livejournal.com 2009-03-19 09:29 am (UTC)(link)
I love the way you've described everything! By which I mean I like your style. =D

[identity profile] glass-icarus.livejournal.com 2009-03-19 02:29 pm (UTC)(link)
thank you! :)

[identity profile] phantomjam.livejournal.com 2009-03-19 01:57 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh wow, that was so gorgeous and atmospheric, a really lovely quiet moment of connection. I love your writing style - beautifully descriptive but still with this nice light touch to it ♥

Needles to say I shall be keeping an eye out for more!

[identity profile] glass-icarus.livejournal.com 2009-03-19 02:29 pm (UTC)(link)
thanks! :> i'm glad you liked it.

[identity profile] ruffwriter.livejournal.com 2009-03-22 12:41 am (UTC)(link)
I am totally behind on your lovely writings, but this is incredibly hot. ♥ MORE~

[identity profile] glass-icarus.livejournal.com 2009-03-22 04:24 am (UTC)(link)
&hearts! :> more is coming! (well, once i've recuperated from my latest remyth, accomplished that Kubotoki mpreg story i owe, etc... *g*)