ext_80192 ([identity profile] lady-nara.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] glass_icarus 2009-02-21 04:38 am (UTC)

This was very good!

While I observed the tension between Shouri and Conrad in the anime, I hadn't really thought through all the implications. Of course Shouri would be terribly jealous, not only of Yuuri being protected by someone else, somewhere else, but also of Yuuri's obvious attachment and admiration for Conrad. Where Yuuri gets irritated and won't allow Shouri to help him, he naturally turns to Conrad. Yet Shouri does eventually become more comfortable with Conrad, at least to the point where he trusts him to look after Yuuri while he's not around.

I thought you showed the internal struggle and the beginning of friendliness very well!

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