I am speechless. This is so vivid it feels real, and I love the glimpse of Ned as a young man and starving artist, Meghan's ever-so-slight bitterness, Ned's not-stalking-no-really, the bartending. Basically, this is perfect and I have no idea what I can say to express just how much I love this. You just keep writing better and better fiction, don't you?
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